Mary Sue/Gary Stu Quiz!

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I did this out of fear.... 0_0
these symbols represent my characters(well, some of them):
O= Orachi
H= Himoko
Ki= Kiany

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[Ki] They are physically strong.
[O] They have a rare hair/fur color  (purple is normal for Ki. on her planet)
[O/H] Their eyes are an unusual color (Again, normal for Ki.'s species)
[H] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[O] They are immortal (H doesn't die from old age, but can die. Ki. can die from too much rejection of self worth)
[Ki] (if a female) they have large boobs (for large body)
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular (H. can only be muscular in semi/dragon form)
[Ki] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[H] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers 
[Ki] They are a healer (normal on her planet, but difference is she can heal herself, too)
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents 
[ ] They ran away from home
[H] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[Ki] They never knew their parents.
[O] They were abused/spoiled as a child (T.O.R.T.U.R.E.D.)
[Ki] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends (they all got right amount of friends, many acquaintances)
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[H] They look much younger/older than they really are. (Age does not apply for Ki., O is not supposed to exist.)
[Ki/H/O] They are currently in a relationship. (Kiany's in a triad, as for the others...you'll see ;D)
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. (nope... The situations they go through are too hard and confusing to set morals)
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[O] They have an emotional disorder (he's been through so much)
[O] They struggle to stay sane (again, he's been though so much)
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[Ki/H] They are very intelligent (Himoko chooses to act immature. Orachi knows alot, but is not intelligent. -_-)
[O] They have hallucinations (Ho-Ly SHIT he does.
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet (Orachi has a cat named Meepers)
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[H] They have a 'special type' of soul (you'll see ;D)
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[Ki] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (one ghost named Daisy)
[Ki] Some part of their body glows (Ki.'s crystal)
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name (Compared to what!?)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstice etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
[ ] They are connected with a certain element 
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label' (they all change clothes from time to time)
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[O] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (Even he don't know, that's why he's afraid.)
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives (H. lives on the streets most of the time)
[O] They are hiding from someone/something (YOU'LL SEE... O-O)
[ ] They have a rare blood type (nope)
[ ] They cry blood
[O/Ki] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (YEP)
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[O] They are very mysterious/dark (the faces he makes...)
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of royalty/guardians/etc.
[H] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (SAD PAST...)
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (O. has a condition, but not sure if it counts as medical)
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia


Overall points: 

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke (H. used to.)
[O] They are an alcoholic (Although all it does is make him dizzy/change personality)
[H/Ki] They are overweight
[O] They are addicted to drugs (takes a lot of them in hope to ease his pain, but it does nothing)
[H] They have a short temper (yyyyyep)
[O] They enjoy bullying others (sometimes, he has a problem.)
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless

Point Reductions: 

< 5 Anti-Sue/Stu
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 < Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
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